I would really like a piece
of your peace
That you carry with you everyday
Over your shoulder, in the ease of your smile
My burdens turn steps into miles
While you turn stones into water
Just give it over, give it over
…You say
To hold it does not serve you
…You say
As you dance above the fray
Adding hours to an elusive day
Sunshine upon a sunken face
My tear drops turn into storms
While you make roses from thorns
I would really like a piece
of your peace
Just give it over, give it over
…You say
As a weight is lifted from my shoulders
And I slowly melt into to the falling waters
While you make peace from pieces
Taking the heaviness from your daughter
Turning sorrow into laughter
* thank you my WordPress family, for welcoming me back with such love and kindness. Each one of you is a treasure to me. Love love love!!
Beautiful piece ❤ In particular: 'My tear drops turn into storms
While you make roses from thorns' Superb 🙂 x
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Thank you so much!
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Stunningly beautiful words, as ever SG. Much love and hugs and to you, it is so wonderful to see your work back and shining bright xx
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My sweet and amaaaazing Lucy :)) thank you so much! Love being back too and definitely need to catch up with the talented and lovely PG :))
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It’s great to have you back, my lovely 🙂 xo
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💗😙
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It’s been amazing to see you back, I love your writing too. Just something I can relate to at times. xx
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That means so much to me Simon. I’m so happy you’re here too and I will catch up with my email this weekend..the weeks are pretty crazy over here;)) thank you again Simon!
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I means a lot to me to see you again, it really does. You catch up whenever you can ok? Don’t go worrying about me, your life is important.
Just know that I’m always about to say hi to whenever. 🙂 xo
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You are so kind Simon. I appreciate that a lot . I know our times are different so I’m not sure if your day is just beginning or ending or maybe somewhere in the middle:)..but I hope this finds you feeling happy and well. Xox
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We’ll I’m guessing you’re in the east of the US like Cali, soniys your morning. Here it’s 7.19pm right now.
It’s a shame we only catch each other morning and night. But at Leach I catch you x
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Haha yes exactly!
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You’re a Cali girl eh? Which part?
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It feels so good to have you around again, Sis 😙
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Thank you so much sis!! You’ve no idea how happy you’ve made me feel. My sunshine us back! :))
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And you have no idea how much happiness your words brought to my heart….. the sun has never stopped shining… glad you stepped outside again 😘
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Me too sis, so much 💗💗🤗😚
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💖💖
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Thank you kind spirit. Received with the love that it was written…and beautifully written at that 🙂
Much love in return, for a heart that has found its peace ❤
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Aww thank you Mark. My true true friend. You mean a great deal to me. Thank you for reading and being here.
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I can’t even find the words❤️. Welcome home 💕
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Oh Rita!! Thank you for encouraging me and loving me back. You help me more than you know. You’re such a genuine amazing soul and I love you sister!! Yep welcome home 😙😊😊
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I love you too! I grin like a fool every time I see your face on my blog ❤️❤️
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Aww!!! That makes me so happy!!! Now I’m grinnin like a fool!! 😆💗
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That’s my girl! So proud your back into this, and with such beautiful words. Major talent mama!
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I love you!!!!!! I’m yelling that;)) I love you so so so much. Thank you honey, for EVERYTHING!!!
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Welcome back! Loved this. Terrific read. 😃
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Hi! Thank you so much:))
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😊
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🙂 💗💗
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I’m so happy to see your kind sweet spirit back here. I love this poem. Turning thorns into roses- an inspiring way to be. I love that line. ❤️
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Thank you so much! Your words really mean a lot to me. I missed all of the love here so it’s been so wonderful to be back :))
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There is so much love here! I’m glad you’re feeling it. 🙂
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Yes there is, it’s the best!
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love is this
bliss
kindness
thoughts of others
pleasing
serenities
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John this is beautiful! Thank you for sharing it here:))
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i m glad you are back my dancer friend
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Me too!! Thank you John
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baby girl dance with me!
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Reblogged this on dreamweaver333.
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Thank you so much for sharing :)) 💗💗
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Souldiergirl returns with a gorgeous piece! Great to see you back in great form 🙏➰💛
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Thank you Antony. Great to be back :))
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Definitely brightens up the place 😉💛➰
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Aww thank youuuu!!!! 🤗💛☺
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💛➰🙏😘💨
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It’s hard to express how good it makes me feel to see this, trooper. I’ve missed your spirit, & the words it gives itself, to feel, to heal, and to bloom. Welcome home….
Love
gigoid
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Gigoid!! My soul brother. I’ve missed you so. You are so dear to me. I guess I needed to run away and hide for a little bit but yes I’m home again 🙂 hugs and love
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I hope the pieces find wholeness as well as peace 🙏🏽
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I believe they already are :)) thank you Syl.
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Welcome back My Beautiful Sisterheart. I have missed you so much. And I have missed your words. Little pieces of your heart. They are as beautiful as you. 💕❤
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Aww Eric!! I missed you so so much. Thank you for that poem today. It was the perfect day for me to read that. You’re so wonderful, a true gift to this souldier.
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Words can’t describe how much I missed you. I have tried. Thank you for bringing your light back to me.
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I was literally just thinking that and I can’t imagine going again. Thank YOU for embracing it again and making me feel so loved and at home.
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So welcome, Sisterheart!
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Very well executed rhyme scheme. It helps add to the uncertainty of how our emotional mending begins and ends. Bless you for the honesty. I look forward to seeing more from you!
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Bless you for your talent and bravery to put your stuff out there. I was and am very drawn in and very impressed.
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Delighted to see you’ve returned and such a wonderful piece! Blessed be
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Hi Jay!! Me too, thank you so much:))
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Absolutely beautiful, heart-felt words!! So glad to see you back!
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Thank you Angel 💗💗
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank you Paul!
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You’re welcome Kristin
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Glad to have you back!
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Me too Paul!! This was so nice of you :))
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😉
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This reminds me of e.e.cummings ‘I carry your heart in my heart’. Beautiful. So glad you’re back. I missed you.
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Wow that’s a huge compliment and one of my favorites. I missed you too. Thanks for coming to see me and filling my heart with wonderful feeling.
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You can’t imagine how happy you made me. Welcome back.
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Awww yay!! My heart just bumped up hearing that Andrew. Thank you so much. I’m happy too :))
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Yay
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Reblogged this on Art by Rob Goldstein and commented:
It’s great to have #SouldierGirl back!
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Awww Robert!! This is so kind!! My heart is rushing over for a heart hug!! Thank you so much my awesome friend:))
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Love all of the imagery in this poem. I found you via Rob Goldstein. I look forward to reading more!
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Thank you so much Lydia!
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I also found you via Robert. This is a beautiful piece of writing, and so needed right now. It speaks to me in a very personal way. Thank you. Look forward to reading more of your work. 💘
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I am so happy you came here, Robert is the best and now he’s connected us :)) I am so thankful for your words and I look forward to reading your posts as well.
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❤️ 💛 💙 💜
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You are a treasure to the WordPress family of artists bringing
a brilliance unique and appealing to all.
This is a beautiful example of it. Eddie
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Wow Eddie that is so kind to say! Your words mean so much, thank you :))
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you’re very welcome Souldier Girl, have a peaceful week
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You too wonderful Eddie
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It has always been easy to love you my sister, your genuine and selfless heart…I would love to give you my peace…but all I can do is share a poem with you hugs and blessings always!
Your Name
Bring sweet joy
into my world
the likes of which
I have never known
Become a part
of my inner being
Never leaving my
spirit alone
Comfort me with
your caring love
bringing alive within
me that subtle change
So the only song my
heart will know shall
be the one which
happily embraces your
name.
When God says your name he
smiles and when you embrace
his name his peace will always
appear because he loves you and
you are a priceless treasure to
him! Have a beautiful day my
sister!!!!
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Omgoodness Wendell!! This is so beautiful..I can’t believe how blessed I am to come upon this beautiful writing of yours for me-encouraging me and reminding me of my Father! I have such thankful tears in the moment. You are such a gift Wendell. Thank you so much!
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Wow! This is an amazing piece of writing. It moved me. Couldn’t wait to read your post, and it’s awesome! Welcome back!!!!✌💓💖
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Yay!! Thank you so much my sweetest Vee. I love seeing your face here :))
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You’re welcome! Stay blessed!!!💛☺
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You too sunshine 😙
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words
~
can liberate
freedom
I believe in you
~
peace
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Such a powerful expression that gives me
Chills and
Hope!
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What would WP be without you?
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You’re going to make me cry Tammy! Thank you so much. I’ve missed my sould sister ❤💗
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Aww Hugs and Love 🙂
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❤
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I’m glad to see you back!
*HUGS*
🙂
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Thank you so much!! Hugs back!! 😊
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Thank you Ian!!
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this has a nice flow to it and the rhythm and pacing work quite well for the subject matter. I also really like the hopscotch rhyming pattern you do that separates it from the doggerel but still gives it a pattern.
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Thank you so much Todd. I so appreciate your words and visit :))
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What a beautiful post, I hope to hear more from you!
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Thank you!
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