Just like Us 

by Souldiergirl

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Nestled in your lap

Lying in the coldness

No one else is here

Sounds of midnight twinkle like stars

The ones we cannot see

Hiding beyond a distracted city

Whose jealous buildings compete to meet the sun

And are melted before they ever do

Tonight I am one with you

We need not search for words

Our connection screams to rise

Upon those buildings where the birds nests hide

In the shadowed corners

…Just like us

A pair of eternal friends and lovers

Curled into the secret of each other

A small drifting pocket

Against the eyes of the universe

Just me

Just you

101 thoughts on “Just like Us ”

  14. Beautifully written Soldier Girl.

    Your heart is shining,
    words made of love,
    because of your journey,
    flies the beauty of a dove.

    Be strong little lady, the journey teaches much.
    And as hard as it is, it is given with much love…I promise.

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  21. You are a passionate soldier girl and very dear with all these feathers ! I especially liked your line , ” jealous buildings compete to meet the sun ” …your poem mesmerizing and golden ! Love , megxxx

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  23. Reblogged this on ' Ace Friends News ' and commented:
    The perfect relationship sounds simple but is most difficult to achieve – simply you give everything to your partner and they give everything to you.

    Try it and your relationship will be perfect but do not expect it to be easy – anything worth having is always more difficult.

    I know!!

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  25. Beautiful poem as usual. This is bdlheart. I had to abandon my original site because of technical issues. I finally got the courage to start a second site bdlheart2. It is the same site just looks different and only has one post right now. I miss reading your blog and your comments on mine. So far I have one post and updated my about page. More to come. I hope you will come visit.

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  30. So lovely. Sort of bittersweet. You truly have a gift. I felt transported reading this. To a different time and place. I felt I was the one I the dark going true the motions of love and loss.

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    1. Thank you so much- you are so sweet to me, and your words are such an encouragement :)) sorry my my delayed response-we’ve been battling the flu bug here for the past couple weeks.
      Thank you beautiful soul.

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  32. if i lived next door to you i’d pick your brain for 23 hours and give a hour and day to rest from me checking out that greatness and depth that emerges from within you and your soul. i love going back on your catelog of works
    and just spend time being in said mood
    and mind. you stay moving my soul

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    1. Not sure how I missed this gorgeous comment Max. You are incredible to me. I love when you read my works. Everything is from a very deep and vulnerable place so knowing it touches you the way it does means so much to me. My soul brother 💙

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