Feel Me 

by Souldiergirl

  
I burn to run 

…Straight to you 

My desire spreads like a wildfire

And I am being torched alive 

The wind carries my ashes

…once fingertips

Covering your darkness

Cloaking you in shadows bliss

Placing feeling where I wish I could be

Being kissed by my ferocious breeze

Through time and destiny

Twisted tales of tortured beings

Somehow managed to converge …and be

A curse to feel yet a gift to me! 

You 

Are

Real

As my body melts into water

Sucked up by a quenching sun

Raining a universe away

To the place where you stand

For you to feel me

Once again

Even if it is just as a raindrop

…on your hand 

  

147 thoughts on “Feel Me ”

  1. wow – no words – I like to add the following composition:

    Do you feel me,
    When day changes to night.
    Where silence is at best it can be,
    And nothing is at sight.

    Do you feel me,
    When rain drops tap on your pane.
    Remembering the memory between we,
    And feeling your heart with pain.

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  5. This was so wonderful, so vivid, romantic, and clearly felt. Beautiful! That all is love. The quote at the end is the important difference from being in love to the one and only true love which makes you rise in who you are and takes the idea of being someone to be loved. Great!

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    1. Aw thanks sweet sista!! Yes I love that quote- I had never read anything like that before and I was taken aback- like yes! That’s it exactly- rise in love! Thank you so much for sharing and being here lovely lady!💗💗💗

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  6. Absolutely stunning my dear.i aspire to be this good.
    Your words are sheer beauty and dance with conviction and love. So truly heartfelt and inspired.
    Love it
    Love it love it☺☺☺

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  9. the dreamer is the first to whine why aint that mine? well hell it is not to whine but to compile a file of joys a box of frogs more than burnt crispy logs and putting flowers on them graves. cos the dead are up or down and love you . but you must do better .

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      21. I’m doing pretty good. Who am I? Hmmm-im an alien disguised as a random girl who loves to write. My name is Kristin. K is fine- that’s what my brother called me.

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      22. nice to meet you kristin. i don tneed ur last name or address or anything too close for your comfort. but as a scorpio i like to use first names and some familiarities. death and taxes and losses oh shit another poem coming on. your fault too!

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  10. So beautiful, Sisterheart. Verse which echoes my greatest wish for you. Happiness and solace within the arms of a kindred soul. Another beautful heart to watch over you and to help shoulder the burden life has handed you. All my best, Shieldmaiden. ❤

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      4. I do feel like I am being picked up from my slump- I had to just look in in the eyes and say–no–you’re not gonna take me down cuz Ima a warrior and I have warrior friends so watch out! ;)) you help me so much ❤️❤️❤️💗

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  23. “A curse to feel yet a gift to me!
    You
    Are
    Real
    As my body melts into water
    Sucked up by a quenching sun
    Raining a universe away
    To the place where you stand
    For you to feel me
    Once again
    Even if it is just as a raindrop
    …on your hand”

    those last few lines sealed this poem as a magnificent work of art. written by the heart. Stunningly beautiful SG…beginning to end

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  24. Very beautiful… The last two verses reminded me of a poem by E.E . Cummings called “Somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond”… in which he says… “nobody,not even the rain,has such small hands”… that poem was even featured in a film by Woody Allen… (“Hannah and her sisters”, I think). Thanks so much for sharing your great poems. All my best wishes. Aquileana ⭐

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  27. if you could just fly
    and reach skies so high
    only then you will know why
    your poem made me sigh

    for I have heard that far cry
    from a route soudiergirl ply
    and i have felt each
    word with itch
    romantic itch.

    keep up my souldier
    you are so inspiring……

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