Inspired by sweet Annie B
His hands are sweeping her hair
Golden locks, a hiding place for her wilted stare
His love harnesses no questions
He knows, she quietly begs for his affection
He cradles each tear drop
He captures each fear
Allowing her wild spirit
…to roam with a freedom repaired
On the tips of butterfly wings
On the dew of a dawning field
As he
Catches a ride, on her ruby studded coattails
…The magical trace of their glorious fate
From dancing with the stars up on high
To coming down, with a sobering cry
Golden strands again shielding her eyes
He is sweeping her hiding place
and rocking her grief
Across the universe, exists two lovers
and I wonder
…Is one of them me?
Simply beautiful. It gave me little goose-bumps!
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Yay! I am so happy you like it lovely Porter Girl.
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You are amazing me again and again. This was so heartfelt and deep. Beautiful!
Here is a little thank you for you 😘: https://erikakind.wordpress.com/2015/08/07/i-am-recognized/
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Hi my soul sister! Thank you for your words. They are needed and welcomed and you are hugged and loved! Thank you so much for recognizing me. sweet sweet soul-love ya. xxx
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How could anyone not recognize such a wonderful person like you, dear! Remember that you are loved 💖
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You help me with that. Thank you so much angel 😘😘
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You know, that I am always there 💖
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Yes I sure do 😘😊
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‘On the dew of a dawning field’ *sighs* and floats off to never never land. You rock, SG 🙂
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awww- you rock! You are too sweet to me Ryan, and I thank you :))
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Wow! This is so beautiful!
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Hi beautiful, most beautiful soul sister. Thank you xxxo
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Hi there I hope all is well sis I miss you when I don’t see your presence! 🙂
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Hi beautiful sister! I was literally just thinking of you 😊. I miss you too. The kids go back to school in two weeks so all of the sudden it’s rush rush rush to get things done and also just enjoy our summer moments. I miss you too my sis. How are you?
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Hi dear yes I am ok and doing the same here trying to enjoy summer as much we can before school start I homeschool my daughter 🙂
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Oh good for you Carolina! How wonderful. That was always my dream until I had to go back to work after the divorce. I cried for a long time behind the desk at work- but now I am better and so thankful that they are apart of a fantastic Charter school here- so it seems I have had to adjust my dreams :)) love ya sis!
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It’s ok, we all have to adjust at something in life when events happens! I did too I had to adjust at a lots of things during the past 12 years in a email sometimes soon I will tell you all my story, then you will know why I am the way I am today. Btw never give up on dreams you can adjust them 🙂 love you too sis
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Thank you Carolina. I feel so grateful for the precious things you share with me. You are so loving and encouraging. You lift me up and make me smile. Love you
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Gorgeous! Love it!
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Thank you Jennifer :))
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You are welcome! 🌺
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make me ask the same…is one of them me?
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Perhaps we are all asking…
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Nope one of them is me and the other is your poetry. Truly beautiful wow wow wow wow wow. From the heart and the soul☺☺☺
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Aww!! Ok you are too too nice to me :)) and it means so much! Thank you my friend :))
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How much do I love this? The answer lies across the universe. I love Fiona’s cover so much and with a scene from one of my favorite movies of all.
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Oh I am so glad you like it sis! And I like you!! ☺️💖💖
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I did? I love the movie Pleasantville … I forgot the song was in it.
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Reblogged this on Surrendering My Shield and commented:
This sweet girl possesses a soul so deep one can stay lost in her beautiful words for days on end! Thank you, Souldier Girl. You brighten my universe to be certain❤️❤️❤️❤️
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oh!! I just saw this-you are so special to me, my Annie B. Thank you for your words of love-they are much needed and I feel that same love for wonder toward you beautiful one.
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You are one of the angels that keep my heart flying. Love you too sweet, Souldier Girl
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Aw Annie that is so sweet- thank you for telling me that- now you’re going to make me cry again! Just adore you so so much beautiful. Xxxo
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I adore you right back. We have so much to keep us going. We are blessed to have found each other.
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Yes we are- and I miss you!! Come back soon love. Xxx
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They are supposed to move my blog sometime tomorrow – keep your fingers crossed. How are you doing today sweet girl?
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I’m ok- a little weary on the front lines- needs my sis to come give me a hand 😘
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I’m fighting my way back to you sweet soul sister
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Ok! I am here, saving your spot. ❤️❤️❤️☺️
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😘😘😘
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Such a beautiful tribute from My Shieldmaiden to my Favorite Warrior Angel. You guys are something special. *hugs* All my love and respect.
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Thank you so much. Means a lot to hear that right now- hugs, gratitude, love and respect.
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❤❤❤
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ah thy maggert. she does this song justice. and for good reason too. are you a lover?> you were. are you now? dont know. not here though. this is a viral palette to journal what is over done. jai guru. nothing s gonna change my world. it is shuttered and closed off tight sad. so sad.
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I wonder if it’s nice and comfy atop the earth…
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I bet it is
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Let’s take our capes and find out
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Reblogged this on HarsH ReaLiTy and commented:
“To roam with a freedom repaired” is a great line. Nice word string. -OM
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Thank you so much for visiting and sharing my work :))
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The artwork here is just amazing..
*jaw drops*.
Got a lot to learn from this blog..
AMAZING!!
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I loved it too! Thank you so much Celona
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You are welcome dearie 😉
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:))
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Truly beautiful, Sg!
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Thank you Syl
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You’re very welcome ☺
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Beautiful!xx Rachel
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I appreciate that, thank you so much Rachel :))
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This is a wonderful poem it touched me deeply. The Fiona Apple version of across the universe has always been my favourite ever since she released it, knocks the socks off of the original!
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I totally agree Willow, mine too. Thank you so much for being here and for your beautiful words to me. :))
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love the title so beautiful
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Thank you- and you’re the beautiful one by the way :))
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aww you are too kind as are you!
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:))
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Beautiful as always
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Thank you lovely soul 😘😘😘
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💛 beautiful SG as always your words touch the heart 🙏
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Thank you Antony, so much.
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Reblogged this on ' Ace Friends News ' and commented:
Fabulous post and great pIcture love it 👍
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Thank you so much for sharing
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wow…its really so beautiful…souldiergirl must admit you are one unique but with divine heart to bring out something so beautiful yet with ocean of emotions…👌👍
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Wow, thank you! I really appreciate that- yay! Thank you :))
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I was fighting jet lag and missed a few days. What a beautiful poem about eternal love I have found here! Souldier Girl, thank you for sharing this – I am feeling so miserable tonight, and your poem truly “soothes the soul”.
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Oh thank you for being here and sharing your sweet words with me. You are so gentle and kind. I am so sorry you were having a hard night. Are you doing better? I am so glad it helped to be here and I really love when you come around sweetest soul with an amazing eye❤️
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Thank you sunshine! ❤
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Thank YOU!!
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