Write about the gut wrenching pain
That seeps from stomach to heart
Stain the page
With the noises causing my brain hurt
Spinning my mind like a ferris wheel
And I choose not to look down
Without a view to admire
Just that terrible circus music
And a scary clown waving his hands
I stay on…
Falling asleep to wake back up
And running a marathon in between
The life that got me here and the one
I am striving toward
Write about the sharpest broken heart
I have ever felt
A heart shared beautifully into another’s reach
A heart now expanding through trauma and grief
Write about how to get through each second
Do whatever you have to do but promise to make it
It will get better
Because our miraculous beings have an amazing capibility to consistently grow stronger
Become like a child, with a resilient behavior
Write about all of it
The death-the shock-the sickness
The love-the beauty-the moments that stale from quickness
And how you overcame it
Write it out and do not forget
It may seem terrifying now
Or glorious now
When it changes, and it will
Look back on how you made it
To get to paradise
From the guts of laughter
To stain the paper
That is how we will do it
~for our future generations, we must share how we made it from yesterday, to a better place. -Souldiergirl
“Do whatever you have to do but promise to make it
It will get better”..
Yes dear it will…those are precious words…much love to you
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I need my own advice today ;)) I really appreciate you. Thank you so much. πβ€οΈ
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β€ I appreciate you too very much! π
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πππππ thank you, that makes me feel happy
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Hi beautiful Soul β€ Check your email did you? π
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Yes!! So excited!! I will figure out my ring size and get it to you soon! Thank you for your help and kindness to me ππ
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Of course! No worriess when you’re ready π then you will have a wonderful ring! π
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I’m so excited! You are so talented.
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Uh! Scary clown waving at you??? I don’t like clowns … they do scare me. LOL And I am too old to be scared of clowns, right? hehehe …
Another one great poem here, dear! Brilliant! π
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Yes!! They scare me too- it’s just not ok!! Lol. Well if you’re too old then so am I ;)) thank you so much for bringing me smiles Sherrje
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LOL You are welcome! hehe …
Wish you a lovely weekend.
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Thank you! I wish you back a peaceful and happy week :))
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Beautiful, Trini, and my favorite quote as an entry!
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I think you might have got me mixed up- but I’m still excited cuz Trini is super awesome βΊοΈπππlove you soul sista.
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Oh no, it happened again. I am so sorry. But believe me, I did not mix up the persons, just unconentrated with the name. I clearly remember that I had your pic in mind while reading and commenting. So sorry, about that. Big, big hug and much love to you, dear Souldier Sis!!! π π π
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Oh I don’t mind at all! I’ve done that before myself βΊοΈ. So much love to you soul sis- beautiful smart shinning soul sis ;)) π
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You are so lovely, dear soul sister. I hope you heart that every day thousands of times. π π π
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Well that’s why I come visit you- you make me feel very loved πππ
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You are, my sweet friend. How could anyone not love you instantly?
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You are so nice to me! Big smiles inside and out over here, πππ³
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My pleasure!!! π Thank you! β€
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π π πΉ
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Absolutely beautiful β€οΈ
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Thank you so much beautiful Annie β€οΈπ
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You are more than welcome. You are a truly gifted young woman. I am amazed.
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That really means a ton to me- especially coming from you ( a true true amazing woman)- you encourage me so much Annie and I thank you and am hugging you!
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I am receiving it. I need the added energy – allergies have kicked my butt the past day and a half β€
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Ugg I hate those damn things- leave me sweet Annie B alone! ππ
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Feelin’ much better last night and today. Thank you doll.
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And thank you too my lovely Annie B.
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An absolute truth, beautifully put. It is beyond painful at times, to write what I’ve been through, I can only hope it might help at least one person who may wind up walking the same paths. I know I often gain solace from the words of others, who’ve found the perfect translation from emotion to ink. Another beautiful piece SG β€
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I love that- from emotion to ink. I find solace from others words too, so much and from music a great deal- the good stuff of course ;)) I know what you mean, sometimes I am crying as I write- but it’s the only way I know :)) thank you so much for being here Karinβ€οΈ
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yes baby that’s what we’re doing, you do it tremendously well, with blood and guts.
luv ya
Chrissy
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Here’s to our tomorrows of better places as we let go .. I Have written many an Angel letter to burn as I got rid of emotions that needed to be expressed..
Wonderful Poem..
Blessings for a beautiful Future..
Hugs Sue x
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I think there is no better self therapy than writing and then receiving the love and support of others from it
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Heart, mind, and soul, beautiful β€
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I am here … ready … for a conversation … anytime … π
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Thank you my friend. βΊοΈ
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This is so unbelievably poignant…and so relatable for all of us writers out there. I love this. <2
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Thank you so much Britta! :))
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Absolutely!
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:))
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So beautifully written! Love the emotion. “Become like a child”, speak your heart out! I really love this.
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Thank you so much! Means so much to me when you visit and share. I see my daughters joy radiating and I remember when I had her joy- of course I was a small child myself but I yearn for that childlike belief and joy again.
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YES!!!! This is why and how and when and where and the REASON we do what we do. A pressure valve for the soul. A remarkable bleeding of words that teaches and helps and forces pain out into the light where it may still hurt us but we can see where it comes from and how to settle our debts with life.
Amazing as always, Beautiful Poetess!
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I love it “a pressure valve for the soul” whaaat!! Eric you’re a genius. A true poets soul. Thank you so so much for your words to me. I appreciate you- a lot. And I am honored when you call me a poetess βΊοΈπ (that’s me smiling ;)) ).
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Thank you for your kind words, as well. Poetess is only one of many deserving titles that you absolutely should have. I’m glad I could give you a βΊπ. Take care, SG, much love and respect. β‘
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Thank you! So much love and respect to you too Eric- so much. π
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Love and respect, Likewise, Brave Soul.
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Thank you Eric
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don”t forget those wanting to say hello … π peace
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Haha! Never!!! Never ever ever :))
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Beautifully said!
I hope future generations will continue to write.. who knows what might be in 1000 years from now?!..
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Who knows indeed with the way the world turns and changes. Thank you so much! :))
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In my opinion this is a true little piece of Art. Million of Congrats!
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Wow thank you so much! Xxo!!
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The merit belongs to you. I’m pleased to say it π
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You make me smile!! Thank you so much.
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Are you a girl with a soul of a soldier of peace? I’m sorry but I want that you smile twice. Experts says that when we smile a lot of muscles are in movement. I truly think that your composition of the eye is on same level that some works. You can check it yourself if you browse for example the section about the topic ‘Letters, diaries and manuscripts”. In any case you caused the appearing of copper colour’s star on my blog. That makes me so excited. Thanks! β€
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Oh you are so kind! Thank you for sharing that with me. I try for peace in all things as much as I can- not everyone else wants peace so often I just have to focus on pouring it upon myself. You bring me many smiles and I appreciate you so very much!
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Oh and I will look up what you said about the smile and the eyes- thank you!
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I’m an admirer of the rain of the feathers. I’m pleased. Best wishes and see you soon. π
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I looooove feathers. Thank you dear friend.
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Me too. Thank for sharing your opinions with me. take care! xo
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You are so welcome and thank you too!!
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π β€
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You’ve used amazing with me once or twice and well, you know. But know this. You Are. You write with such great passion and when you post a poem you also decorate it with visuals that make it all just explode.
Your fan
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Thank you Antony. Your words and presence here mean so much. I really love the idea of making it all explode- that does sound amazing :)) thank you, my fan.
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