This piece was directly inspired after reading “not here to impress” by photographer and poet Jay. Please give him a looksee :))
~Heart Strokes~
“I wear my heart on my sleeve”
…someone once said
And millions have echoed
Me though…
I wear my heart right here
Wounds at the tips of my fingers
Nails painted
In a flesh toned manicure
Of grief and loss and love and dreams
The sleeve is too far up it seems
Easily camouflaged
Like my shoes on the street
Ripping the shirt into pieces of its birth
With hands to open a throat of words
…I breathe and sit and swallow it down
My heart is what makes my fingertips pound
Click click clack
From my vintage typewriter to this new age device
I keep my heart in my hands
Bleeding…as I write
Love this ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much E. ❤️you
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hmmmmmmmm. talk to me with thine ayes. give me a shingle to mingle. alone i am. yet not the thought of you is not anything . but it is is it it is not.
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Thank you for visiting John :))
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thanks for doing that ellen! from dave.
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Anytime…Dave
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i am john david and you are ellen cos i know not ur name. but it aint my thing nor my scene dont wanna be a creep!
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Well I love the name David- I was actually “supposed” to be a boy- and my name was to be David. So tell me how you came up with Ellen…
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i have an imagination ellen and until you tell me your real name ellen it is!
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Ok sounds like a plan!
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hmmmmm no comment .
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The Hemingway quote is one of my all-time favorites. Love this! 🙂
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Mine too! Thank you so much 🌟🌟
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That’s spectacular
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I really appreciate that! Thank you so so much :))
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❤ My dear friend. I am so honored to have been the inspiration to this magnificent bleeding you offer as prove it must come from a heart to be felt.
And I am feeling this deep in my heart, as it slowly creeps into my soul.
"Of grief and loss and love and dreams" Perfect echoes released from a beautiful soul.
Thank you so very much, SG. Much love to you :))
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Oh the delight and honor is mine! I was overwhelmed with inspiration that it flooded through my hands- I am very grateful to you for that gift. Doesn’t happen too often. Thank you for your words to me here Jay-im humbled you are moved by this piece. Thank you for being an honest soul.
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Reblogged this on NbJ and commented:
Heart strokes from a soul that knows…
Please like & comment on original.
Follow this soul that speaks so beautifully
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Thank you so much my wonderful friend
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“And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt”. ~Sylvia Plath
and you my dear SG, are an amazing writer/poetess and everything you create is sewn with passion.
always a fan of yours…
hugzxxx
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Kinda speechless Antony. You picked a perfect quote- you are so kind to me. Your words stand out beyond Sylvia’s. Thank you
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Raw, beautiful and true. Love this piece SG ❤
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I really appreciate that Karin, thank you ❤️❤️
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You’re welcome ❤
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😊💖
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Ohhhhh so powerful. Resonates deep dear girl.
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Thank you so much lovely Annie B
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This post is one beautiful flow. The quote, your words, the quote again…
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Thank you so much Erika ❤️
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Very welcome, dear!
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💖❤️
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Reading this empties my mind of everything except the struggle to find the words to express how deep this cuts to the core of why I attempt to write. It speaks to the frenzy in my mind when I reluctantly let the words go to live their own life out there in the WordPress universe alone. I am, sometimes, broken and bloody from the attempt. Reading this reminds me it is a common affliction for those that dare to try and in the trying captivate another soul. Thank you for sharing your grief, loss, love, and dreams. they inspire my own.
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Wow I don’t even know how to express my thanks for pouring your soul out to me like this. Realness- beauty- the bleeding of an undeniable writer, encompassed in you my friend.
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Thank you, Souldiergirl. It is enough to know that you and others share that common struggle to put to words what the heart and soul feels. Your poem and the quotes capture the cost of making that connection with the reader when heart and soul sits down to write.
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Hi there, I am inviting you to my Blog I am hosting a “Meet and Greet” session please I would love for you to post a link to your blog in my comments, and let other discover your beautiful Blog! Saturday I will pick one and Feature it…read my post here 🙂
http://yesterdayafter.com/2015/06/16/lets-meet-and-greet-and-featured/
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Okay! Will do :)) so I pick a particular poem or just a link to the general home page?
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I am happy that you’re here! Post anything you feel like to share a poem, or your page you pick 🙂 Thank you!
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Ok! Will do- thank you for doing this 💖
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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I somehow missed this and luckily found my way to it via Jay. Man am I glad! It’s raw, it’s beautiful and it’s oh so powerful. ❤ it
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Thank you so much beautiful friend! Your comment means so much to me- and it came to me at the perfect time. 😊❤️
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Love this so much. So much direct sentiment to my own heart when I write. I split it wide open and hold nothing back. In thay, I know, we are kindred. Beautifully done, Beautiful. ♡
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Yes we are. Thank you so much Eric. Your words really speak to me and comfort me.
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Wow, this is amazing, wonderful writing, thank you… Michelle
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Aww- I really appreciate that Michelle! Thank you
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Awweeeeessssome piece Soldiergirl. Truly raw and strong. And what a great quote by Ernest Hemingway. Wow! I think I’m going to have to pin this.
🙂
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Thank you Staci!! Aw, your words so encourage me- I love them!! You are a light :)) thank you!!
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let it bleed… beautiful… ❤
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Thank you Quirky (btw you’re beautiful :)) ).
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Love this as always. Those two quotes really spoke to me. I am learning that I need to feel every emotion out there and not run away from them and writing has helped me come to that realization. I need to remember that it is okay to be split open and bleed.
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That’s so beautiful. I have ran so much- from every feeling, happy and sad. Even in the corner of sorrow or in moments of light- writing really has been a gift from up on high to get it all out. Just me and my pen. I am so glad you are here. So honored to be apart of the journey ❤️
Yes- it is so ok. And if you ever feel like you can’t just come read and start there :))
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