Your beauty stretches
Wrapping around His earth
The smoke billows strong
Burying your worth
Your needs drown into silence
When whistles hum louder than words.
Natures strength emerges from,
Her hiding place under the wind…
Lifting you up!
To dance and sing once again
Oh my ballerina!
You are the light between my grief
Never thought of ballerina this way! Simply beautiful.
I love the phrase … “Her hiding place under the wind…
Lifting you up!
To dance and sing once again …”
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I am so happy you liked it Sherrie- thank you so much for sharing with me what caught your eyes too- 🙏:))
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Stunning!
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Thank you Annie :))
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That’s a wonderful piece of showing that there are always some light spots between the dark places…
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‘Her hiding place under the wind’ – wow! You are so very eloquent 🙂
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Don’t know how I missed this! Thank you so much for your kindness to me Ryan. Maybe it was a good thing WP spammed me because look at what I may have missed! Too many smiles :))
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🙂 I’m not being kind, I’m just a big fan of your writing and the unique mind behind the words. Too many smiles :))
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Thank you for being my fan Ryan. :))
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I just came back from a few days vacation at the beach and this poem brings me back to that place in time!
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You have an amazing way with words–really pulls the reader in.
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is it okay if i stalk you? love this piece, it took me to a place and time when my daughter took ballet lessons and when i was a teenager and was obsessed with ballet jazz. how the mind works….have a great day gorgeous. x
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Yes please do :)) I adore you so Chrissy. I would love to see you twirl. Xoxo
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🙏 twirling baby just for you! Xx
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Oh you’ve completely made my week beautiful!! 💋
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#wcw you xx
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Now I’m blushing! 💋ditto my beauty.
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“You are the light between my grief” This last line captured me. This is truly beautiful
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Thank you so much Nicole 💖
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Such a remarkable piece of writing. Lines that got me
Your needs drown into silence
When whistles hum louder than words.
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Thank you so much for sharing that with me Jay.
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Peace, light and love 🙏☀❤
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Aw, thanks so much Syl. ☺️🙏
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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so painfully beautiful, you are.
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You are so kind Eric – thank you 💙
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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Thank you for the reblog wonderful sir!
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You are most welcome, Milady.
I enjoy reading and sharing your postings with others who will hopefully appreciate them also.
Wishing you a wonderful day and rest of week filled with happiness, joy, and smiles.
And a big hug from PeterPan and Clan hiding away in Neverland country hideout in boonies of TN..
❤ (๑̀ ͜ʖ๑́) <3.
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Oh bow wonderful! I gladly accept your hug and send one back to you and the Neverland clan- may magic fill your days and nights my friend.
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I feel like PP somedays with all these Kiddies running around and even more when others come to visit. Being mute is only a handicap if you don’t learn to adapt and conquer. I use dry erase boards, make faces and keep it all light. Helps having a Nephew who can read my writing and pass on anything important or funny. We love it here, can’t think of any other place except NM where we would be half as happy. So we stay and savor all the country quiet and privacy, indeed.
we’re a Clan of Huggers and Pranksters, must be in DNA and pass it on to inlaws, too. At first, it took a bit for strangers to understand our Mini UN group, but once they figured out we belong together and it’s all or nothing, they accepted us as part of the community. At first they thought we were just tourists, now they’re glad we’re here, especially at the grocery stores, clothing store, toy store, Chinese restaurant and movie theatre.
I can see their minds ringing the register when we pass through the grocery store))))))))))))))))))
When the rest of Clan invades for Christmas, traffic on our road doubles and triples. ));<))
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You are a wonderful spirit George! Your words bring life and wonderful images of family. Thank you for sharing with me and bringing me smiles. You are a strong brave man and I am grateful our paths have crossed.
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Eloquent artistry. Absolutely beautiful words.
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Thank you so much :))
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Beautiful! and I love the quote you used at the beginning 🙂
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Thank you so much! I love when you visit- every time I see your radiant smile I smile too and it warms me up:))
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Thanks! And no worries. I ❤️your blog 😊
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Yay! Thank you and I 💖yours! :))
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spinning
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twirling
reflecting sunrises
painting worlds and hearts
radiating love
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Under the weeping willow, words drop down to dry my tears.
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Beautiful! I love this piece! I also want to let you know that I nominated you for the Love/Hate challenge http://yesterdayafter.com/2015/06/03/lovehate-challenge/
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Ok- I will take a looksee! Thanks so much :))
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likely as not nor blithy dismiss and the dismay to this day. who is it ?
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Riddler :))
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not really. i am john. but the spirit reminded me one dead or gone ex mate or spouse, one deceased child. what do you expect? she s close, closed but not as much as some you have encountered.
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Sometimes it’s as tho you speak in riddles, is what I meant. It’s ok to have a nickname right?
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Beautifully written!
I love the emotion, and the uplifting energy!
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I love your sweet words!! Thank you!
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Such a beautiful write and very flawless 🙂
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You are such a treasure to me Quirky.
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Thank you
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