The last leaf of fall
Settled at my back door
Whispering secrets of the coming spring
So I folded it
Into the safety of a golden locket
….When the night arrives to me
Coated in a chill of melancholy
I pink inside a patient heart to see
The hush of a pale sunlight
The prick of a honey bee
The song sung by kissing trees
The promise of better days
Hidden whispers
Revive me
Then gently tuck away
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Thank you Jin :))
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Ohhh, this is so marvelous, touches my heart.
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Thank you Dell! Your kindness touches mine ❤️
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Very nicely written…
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Thank you so much Rajiv
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Reblogged this on Polly'sPage and commented:
A poem filled with the secretness of the reminder that seasons change, time changing.
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Thank you ❤️
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Very beautifully written, you’d painted this beautiful image in my mind.
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I am so comforted to hear that. Thank you ❤️
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Oh, this is so beautiful! … The last leaves fallen and folded open some secrets of time for you … Lovely! Lovely! 🙂
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Aww thanks so very much Sherrie! Love and appreciation to you ❤️❤️
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You are welcome! 😉
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:))
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much JC.
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Reblogged this on MY.THOUGHTS.MY.LIFE.MY.WORLD. and commented:
A talented writer in her own way! This is simply a very beautiful poem that she wrote.
Enjoy reading! From Souldiergirl! 😉
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Lovely.. Beautiful subject❤️
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Thank you so much Nina :))
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This is really touching!
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Thank you Erika ❤️
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💖
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Beautiful.
Please go support a service member in need.
http://www.gofundme.com/cryingboots
Help him he’s suffering from PTSD and depression and requesting assistance.
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I will check out the link- thank you.
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in a pocket . a broken watch and a locket. the tress to caress treasures of loves long past. at last! cheches?????
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Tress to caress treasures- very nice John
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Wonderfully written!! Loved this one!
I especially like the line:
The song sung by kissing trees
I think that’s such a great descriptive line!!
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I appreciate that so much Eric. Deep and true thanks to you. :))
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Lovely!….
gigoid
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Thanks gigoid!!
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Such tenderness…
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I really love that- thank you ❤️
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“The promise of better days” I like that line, very hopeful. Words accompanied by a deep breath.
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Thank you so so much my friend!
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You’re welcome!
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I think I have a good wine to sip over it, are you in? :))
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To sip over my poem? ☺️
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To enjoy it with the wine 🙂
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Well I’m glad it is worthy of such- thank you!
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It is, I know you like when I say that, love your stuff 🙂
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☺️ it is true I am very grateful with such expressions :))
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My pleasure, as I said before. I can say it all the time 🙂
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😊you are too kind
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❤
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So beautiful…
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Thank you so much Leslie
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You’re most welcome. Smiles
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Smiles :))
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I love this! It’ is rather patiently seductive…
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Oh I love that description- why thank you very much ;))
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Love this!
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Thank you lovely!
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Awesome poem, I am going to reblog this poem;
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Thank you so much Deb!
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boom with bloom
~
your heart
nurtures flowers
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Your words are beautiful
And blossom my heart
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Very nice! Thank you very much. Kisses.
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Thank you Louis!!! ☺️🙏
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the month left. the mouth cleft. what a want when you cant cannot will not never ever be whole again!
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Never say never ;))
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somethings are never
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This is true, yes
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of course it is.as a man i must respect barriers. the writing will suffice tilheaven. lmao
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Yes much will suffice until then
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nothing suffices.but one door opens another closes. peace
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You’re right nothing will suffice for the losses that have carved holes in my being- peace to you
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love comes to the open door heart and mind. me i m a hater baby! whatever your name is! lmao
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Ah, so you are closed?
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very much so. i have learned i am mostly repellant so. subtle is lost on me.
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I doubt you are repellant
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well anyway.
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Ok.. Have a good Saturday.
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beautiful ……..
kiss my beautiful friend
marcello
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️Kiss Marcello- over and over :))
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