On everything you forgot
In such a hurry to leave
Now these boxes sit like dead company
Biting my nails The snail trailing time
You didn’t even tell me! …What I did wrong
My heart a bleeding artery
Hanging like the vacant frames nailed into our drywall
Even though the house is gone
Purple circles from no sleep Are darker than my chestnut eyes
Eventually I stopped asking Besides, your ghost never replies
Spinning ballerina in a box The laborious turn to start again
Lights slowly seeping in
The process of a beautiful corpse Growing back her skin
it did skip slip slide away til today fermenting
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It never slides completely away
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no some stains are forever. however you have the strength to share it and pay if forward. nice!
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Thank you
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well i had a mother . four sisters, one dead one ex and i realise careful what ya ask for. you may get it!
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Yes I do!
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you do what? lol
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I get it :))
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I love Your writing, Your mind, Your creativity and everything about you babe
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😢 thank you my love. That means everything to me. Now I am floating and I love loving you. :))
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Love this. Very stong. A real good write.
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Thanks so much Dicky.
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I love reading what you write. Good stuff.
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I love when you visit. Thank you very much :))
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Good stuff 😉
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You’ve got the great stuff!
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You went to another level with this. I love the thought process. Letting go and new beginnings. Awesome!
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Yay! Thank you Syl. Yes new beginnings- I hope to find more of the light you express and shine onto others daily!
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You’re welcome and I believe you’re doing that my friend 🙂
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Aww your support and encouragement/belief mean so so much-you are such a good soul!
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Thank you! You have a great weekend!
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You too my friend!
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Will do my friend!
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Yay! 👏😊
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Just too awesome ☆☆☆
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I felt everything that happened, there. So good at filling in between the words with emotions.
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Thank you Eric! I love knowing the emotion I feel when I write can be felt when read too- I really appreciate you :))
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No better feeling than for a writer to know that they are so effective! And you are!
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Thank you so much Eric!
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This poem makes me go ‘Uhhh’, like a heavy sigh, with the end a glimpse of hope. Lovely expression.
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Aww! Thank you so much- now I have a lovely image of my words bringing you a slice of hope and a good sigh. Thank you for telling me :))
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You’re welcome.
🙂
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😊❤️
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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Thank you George! And how are things in your world good sir?
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My indeed ));<)))))
Elbow healing well,
face slowly healing
Basement railing removed, to be replaced by stronger and a bit higher one in near future. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Kiddies growing like weeds and making absolutely abundant sounds of happiness and joy, and wearing me out, thankfully not Summer yet. Cloudy yesterday and cool for kayaking on the lake, I'll be glad when their arms are longer and reach into the water to help paddle.
Until then, it's all on me, but I'm blessed and won't complain.
ᗯᓰᔕᖺᓮﬡᘐ Ꭹᗢ⋒ ᗩ ᘐᖇᙓᗩ♈ ᖙᗩ૪
ᗩﬡᖱ
ᙡᗝﬡᖙᙓᖇℱᘮᒪ ᗯᙓᙓḰᙓﬡᖱ.
( ◑‿◑) 💨 💖💖
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I love your beauty of creating words into pictures and patterns. You rock sir George! Love to hear you are doing well and the joy from the little ones- you paint a lovely picture my friend :))
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Why thank you so much for the kind words. A whole week without another Klutz incident, yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy.
Healing well, thankfully can eat almost everything on both sides ( slowly tired of puree and blender Surprises made from leftovers in Fridge). Actually it was good to clean out ye old Fridge, especially that which I don’t remember how long it’s been hiding some stuff) ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Girlies are enjoying the little bits of sunshine between the dark and dreary rain days. Today they got up and decided, rain or not, we’re going outside to check on hummingbirds, ducks, geese and other inhabitants of Nature nearby. Only 3 and so “determined.” Actually, it’s probably my fault, they know if they “ask” just right, Onkel George can’t say NO to them. I’m definitely “wrapped” unless Sis has put down her foot, then I’m not willing to cross that Tornado, not sure my insurance policy covers “tempting fate.”
Hopefully you had a good weekend and the rest of the week will be Sunshinney and Wunnerfull.
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
❤ (๑̀ ͜ʖ๑́) <3.
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wonderful sis, your every word speaks to ma, amazes me…so flippin talented You!!! hugs and love always Paris
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Love love Paris! I am always giddy when I see my favorite poetess here. Thank you for your love and awesome thoughts my sister ❤️❤️
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Your words always inspire and motivate me to write ❤️❤️
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That’s the best compliment. Your writing helps me so- hope you are having a relaxing Friday beautiful sis
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hi lovely, I am and I’m so relax I’m melting into the couch…off to bed…sweet dreams to you ❤ Paris
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Oh I love to hear this! Wrapping thoughts of you up with love and velvety bows 💖💖💖
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Such a flow.. Remarkable :))
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Hi Jay! Thank you very much for your awesomeness and your time :))
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My pleasure :))
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Mine too!
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“Trickle into Me”, wonderful writing, demanding the reader to feel. Love this! Wonderful! For me, there are so many strong and visual verses that really captivate with a sense of deliberate determination, which makes this poem so very powerful. Here are some favorites verses,
“My heart a bleeding artery”
“Hanging like the vacant frames nailed into our drywall”
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“Lights slowly seeping in”
“The process of a beautiful corpse Growing back her skin”
Lovely artwork and a great quote!
Take good care,
Pepperanne
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Thank you so much Pepperanne! I love hearing the words that captivated you and that you took the time to visit and share with me means so much :)) ❤️
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This is what I needed, this hour of the day. To touch me there where it screams to be touched
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Wow-I know those screams and the pain of going untouched- I am honored by your comment- your honesty. Thank you so much.
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Thank you for your kind words, yep, alas. No soothing remedy…
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We just gotta keep on don’t we- yes i don’t have a cure yet- mostly distractions.
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Yes and I am not even comparing yours to mine. You are right, distractions is the word…
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If I find a secret cure I will come to you straightaway. :))
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Maybe coming straightaway is the cure 🙂
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☺️
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🙂
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Great idea 🙂
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🙂
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Love – ‘these boxes sit like dead company’ – very strong thought/image for me. Such a powerful poem 🙂
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Thank you Ryan. Love hearing what spoke to you.
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I love it… particularly these verses, which really resonated with me: “Eventually I stopped asking / Besides, your ghost never replies”.. All the best to you. Aquileana ⭐
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Thank you Aquileana! You are so kind. I am so glad to know those lines captivated you. The best to you too, always! 💫💫💫
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Reblogged this on Periodically Demented and commented:
Such a talent, and a really lovely person, too.
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beautiful, you have a way of invoking emotion.
thank you.
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I really appreciate that Addy, thank you
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Beautifully written, (hugs)
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Thank you! Hugs to you too Tina
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Very powerful words and beautiful artwork! Brava!
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Aw, thanks so much!! :))
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My pleasure! Smiles.
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thank you very much and happy weekend ….💗💗💗
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Happy weekend to you!!
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Very powerful sis! You stay as strong as your words, and you will definitely be a winner. Thank you for sharing this. God bless you! Much love❤✌
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Thank you Vee! I fight hard for it- although sometimes I collapse. Maybe that’s just our Father telling me to rest. Bless you to the heavens and back beautiful Vee ❤️💖
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God knows when to make us rest girlfriend! Much love and peace! Have a blessed day. 🙂
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True that! Usually He puts up some “roadblocks” so I am forced to quit running and just rest- He truly loves His children.
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Amen! He sure does!
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💖🙋
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❤️
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Love it!
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Yesss! Thank you beauty :))
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Good piece!
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Thank you Lino!
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I want to add to this.. i like it alot the beauty of your raw thought☺ nice
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I appreciate that Lino! 😊
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