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Upon these cotton blankets
My head falls
Tired and wasted
I smell you like you never left
A hundred sentences
Composed from one breath
The flicker of a memory
A single droplet
Composed from one symphony
A sadness washes over me
Unattended now
My head falls
Tired and wasted
I smell you like you never left
A hundred sentences
Composed from one breath
The flicker of a memory
A single droplet
Composed from one symphony
A sadness washes over me
Unattended now
Hushing echoes of my soliloquy
Souldier Girl 
What a lovely symphony of words, nice work 🙂
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Thank you very much :))
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I really liked this…so tender.
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Love that word, tender :)) thanks so much.
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I meant it. And thanks for the poetry, although I’m sure you do it as an expression of yourself more than anything.
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I really appreciate your words- it means everything to know it touches others in some way- I love that- thanks so much for sharing with me.
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Lovely. Beautiful artwork, too.
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Thanks PorterGirl 💖💖
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Nicely done
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Thank you :))
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A great art to go with lovely words. Ending is perfect 🙂
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Thanks so much Alok!
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Another great poem. You have a serious writing gift girl. Don’t stop..
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Dang Michelle! You made my day :)) thank you so much- ok, I won’t. I can’t- it’s the healthiest addiction I’ve ever had- ;))
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Words that make you “sigh”, beautiful artwork too.
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Well that’s a huge compliment Syl- thank you very very much :))
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You’re very welcome. Thank you for the words you share 🙂
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It’s one of my favorite things to do :))
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Well, they have been awesome to read 🙂
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Thank you so much Syl. You bring me smiles :))
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You’re welcome, smiles shared in appreciation 🙂
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Breathtaking flow of you. I am in AWE!
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Well that’s how I feel every time I visit your blog Jay! Thank you so much for your kindness.
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someday may never come jc fogarty . two to one one is now without the other. a lover no more her cover stays . and the words play on!
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Thanks for visiting :))
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A beautiful introduction for me to your poetry. Lovely.
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That’s means very much to me- thank you! ❤️
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What they said. Really evocative memory one can feel and well matched to the painting.
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Thank you so very much Randstein.
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you have made my day the beauty of this pic captivates my creative pose.
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That means so much, thank you Miss S:))
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This was such a sad, poignant post with beauty and grace displayed in your writing. You help me to picture someone in this moment.
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Thank you for you words and expression of how my piece made you feel- I truly appreciate it 💜
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❤
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😊💖
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Beautifully penned.. I particularly liked the last three verses!:
Best wishes, Aquileana 😀
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Thank you so much Aquileana! ❤️❤️
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Posting nice and beautiful design blog
How do you think of my blog?
Thank you
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Thank you very much and happy weekend ….💗💗💗
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Happy weekend to you too!! Thank you 😊
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
POWERFUL !!!!!
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Thank you very much!
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hauntingly beautiful! you words always leave me breathless!
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That means a lot to me Lori, thank you so much.
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You’re so welcome 🙂
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Thanks for following my blog! I appreciate it very much. Did you paint this? It is lovely!
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Absolutely! I love it and love your pen “whitefeatherfloating”- stunning. No I found this painting on pintrest- I agree very lovely. :))
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so delicate. gave me chills ❤
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Thank you. I am so glad you came across my blog so I could discover yours :))
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I know, it’s awesome being able to find other talented writers
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Yes- I know, I get giddy! :))
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beautiful use of words and image.
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Thank you so much Robert.
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Very pretty painting. Did you paint this?
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Nope- wish I could paint like that
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Yeah, I can’t paint anything.
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Me either- but I do like to play with paints ;))
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I frustrates me. I should have taken some kind of art class in high school. I fail even at paint-by-numbers. Go figure.
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Well screw the numbers- just put your hands in some paint and get a little crazy! I doubt Pollock followed any lines- he just invented his own.
*cheers
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It does sound therapeutic. Cheer, dear.
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🙂
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Hello 🙂
The painting reminds me of Flidais, giantesses…
Flidais:
http://in1.ccio.co/u5/O2/MF/adb195e38365accfa26669125707ad7e.jpg%3Fiw%3D300
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flidais
Thank you 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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