Too angry to dress
The platforms I avoid to address
But this rage
shakes my skeleton
Turning me to a different page
Don’t look at me!
Don’t even turn to ask me
I won’t pause for the door keys
My fists pound down the wood
My fists bleed with fury
Like the boundary got crossed
Like the lines that got lost
The flood is rising
Too high for us to cross
Too deep for us to handle
I saw myself
Alone at the bus stop
Where suburbia melts into the ghetto
And I can’t stay cuz I belong there
I ran faster than the wolves there
Some kind of homegrown shelter
I recognize the pain of others
Without words or a disguise
It hardens all over our faces
And we don’t hide it
Our skin is thick with an abrasive truth
Cracking with the melancholy of accomplishment
Adrenaline has me shook again
Left to make sense of a windstorm
Without the comfort of the wind
Stand up and dig in
The rusted smell of a broken swing
The sting of smiles where we played
Muddy feet and wrung out blankets
Keep me warm again
Distant lies and cold hands
Got me runnin again
Towards a forgotten empowerment
Bones of a new
Now that is talented writing 🙂
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Well coming from you Im very excited you think so. My day has been made ;))
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In turn that makes my day… Perhaps we can write something together sometime…
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Perhaps we can 🙂
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https://lewisfoxy2.wordpress.com/gateau-aux-carambars/
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i admire u’r strong poetic voice!
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Thank you so much!
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There’s high commitment in this writing born i feel of powerful conviction and a deep understanding of the ways of the world and the fragility of our natures.
i like this very much, Souldiergirl
Best Wishes
john
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I so appreciate your understanding of my piece and taking the time to share with me.
Thank you John!
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You’re most welcome, my pleasure
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you are such an amazingly powerful poet Souldiergirl…….
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John! Thank you- that means more than you know. Xo
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XO
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beautiful poetry, btw, you are invited to the :“Non-Love in More than Ten Sentences Challenge”: no pressure, only if you want to :-). find the details at https://aheartafire.wordpress.com/2015/04/09/non-love-in-more-than-ten-sentences-challenge-la-audacia-de-aquiles/
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Ok! I appreciate the extension of the challenge and your sweet comments too :))
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Do you not like my posts on my blog? …. 😦
If you like my blog then please follow me …. 🙂
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Hi- I am following you!!
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Wow!! This one is simply awesome. Just loved it ,dear 🙂
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Thank you beautiful Nimmi. ❤️❤️
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Veey strong… I love this… 🙂 more catching up… I miss reading your poetry… was away for weeks… 🙂 be well… 🙂
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I am so glad to see you back! Hope all is well with you Quirky. Thanks so much for spending time here :))
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You’re welcome… ❤
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Stunning:)
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:)) appreciate your support and comments so much Kim.
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Beautiful..!!
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:)) thanks so much.
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Credit is all yours 🙂
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😊
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🙂
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