We are skyscrapers in the wind
Forged In the center of a hurricane
Collided as one we bend
Tell me you love me
Let me feel your hand
Let our flesh melt into eachother
As the harpist leads the band
Calmly sinking below sea level
Their music resonates in crystalline bubbles
We rise faster and faster
As triumph outruns disaster
Tell me you love me
Melt your words into my skin
I can no longer hear the music
Yet the harp is in my hands

Now that is rather cool, madam.
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Well thank you kindly!
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Lovely
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You’re lovely ❤️ miss you
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Very good indeed 🙂
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Thank you Richard!
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awesome, thanks for sharing.
also, beautiful pic
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Thank you George!
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My pleasure indeed ));<)
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Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
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:))
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Reblogged this on Jin Okubo.
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Reblogged this on Teacher as Transformer and commented:
I don’t what captured my eye most: the image, the poem, or the excerpt from Pablo Neruda. Perhaps it is the way they fit together into one. When two people are meant for each other, there is an entwining that is magical.
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It absolutely is magical when two connect that way. Thank you so much for the reblog and for the sweet comments.
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Wow. Totally amazing. Feels like classical music except in words. 😉
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Thank you Kim! That’s a very fabulous compliment 😊❤️❤️
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All around beautiful. Love the Native American image and the quote really adds to the foundation of your poem.
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I appreciate that very much Syl!
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You’re welcome, like I said, beautiful all around.
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Wonderful.
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Thank you 🌸
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Stunning and stirring simultaneously. Beautiful my friend.
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Thanks so much John.
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Of course.
XOXO
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You’re beyond kind and super talented C4. 💙💙
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This beautiful poem inspired me to respond in sonnet form … It’s bad etiquette to plop my website here; so I won’t, but feel free to read it!
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That makes me very excited to hear! Thank you so much- and I of course will check it out :))
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Beautifully written… Bravo!!!
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Thank you very much :))
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U’r windswept imagery really blows me away. 🙂
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Yep, good stuff right here.. thank you
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I appreciate that so much! Thank you
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Anytime
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Wow! Shiver, shiver. Lovely. You are quite the wordsmith! Beautiful! Pam Wagner
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Thank you so much Pam!
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The picture and the poem itself have great chemistry together and the quote really stood out. There’s a lot of things that went right here- keep up the great work!
and of course, thank you so much for taking the time to read this comment and my blog.
-Daniel
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Ofcourse Daniel! Thank you so much for visiting and sharing kindness here :))
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